If you haven't read it yet, you should! And don't bother reading my rant about it until after. For a lot of reasons, the most obvious of which is that most of this wont make sense until you do, and also what little might make sense would be a big fat pile of spoilers.

( Cut for way too many pages of review )

    "Baby, it's Cold Outside," had its original purpose in the role of one of four fics that were supposed to go up all together on Hiroto's birthday in 2010. I wrote it in April in my sweltering bedroom on a fifteen inch legal pad in blue pen and it sucked ass. Essentially. Okay, so it wasn't so bad, but it needed serious revision. As fate would ( Read more... )